TRP is a post-Great War AU RWBY RP set in Mistral City and Haven Academy with no canons, no rank claims, no maidens, and no god interference. We offer a progression system and site-wide events that change the setting based on player actions.
Post by Bianca Sabbato on May 16, 2020 17:56:47 GMT -5
EDITED TO ADD THE XP GAINED FROM THE "DOWN TO EARTH THREAD"
Exchanging my 2 E.P
1st one for 400XP from the New Player Bonus. 2nd one for 250XP as regular.
For a total of 400 + 250 + 264 = 914XP
And from this I wish to spend 75 + 200 (total of 275) to raise her Durability from G --> E And 425 to raise her Agility from E --> D with no flavor change.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Stabilization (Durability)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] E
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Bianca has learned to strengthen her aura to a point it’s durability is comparable to that of raw stone. Even tough she was not blessed with a strong, resilient body or plentiful aura reserves like many of her peers, she has found a workaround in the form of disciplined training and constant control of the density of her aura all around her body to administrate and distribute her aura in an optimized manner to reduce as much damage intake as possible.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Tough Love (Agility)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] D
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] The basis of Bianca’s martial training can be boiled down to getting pummeled by thugs and drunk teachers until she was able to dodge. This experience left more in the girl than mere childhood traumas, it also nurtured into her the ability to dodge, evade, roll and squirm out of the way of blows and projectiles on an almost instinctual level.
EDIT: Since I managed to squeeze it up. I'd also like to spend an additional 200 XP to upgrade Bianca's weapon from F --> E
[*code][font size="4"][b]Nereida[/b][/font]
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Weapon(s):[/b][/font] E
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Weapons(s):[/b][/font] Nereida is a combat spear as long as Bianca is tall, golden all along its body except for the robust spearhead of cyan coloration. Around the socket are multiple gnarled purple protrusions that coil and ensnare around the upper part of the shaft in resemblance with a coral reef.
The coils hide within them the mechanism that allow Bianca to transform her weapon. At the press of a button on the handle, the spearhead of the weapon falls of, revealing a long chain emerging from the interior of the shaft and connecting it to the spearhead, allowing Bianca to reach long distances with every swing of her weapon. Pressing the button again retracts the chain, returning the spear to its original form.
Nereida uses water dust charges that explode from the coral formation around the tip of the spear, and can be activated with a hidden button close to the handle of Nereida. This charges can be used on the extended form of the weapon with no problem whatsoever, allowing Bianca to do things like strike a far away enemy with the chained dart and immediately releasing a burst of water at point-blank.
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For a total spent of 900xp
Xp left= 14
Last Edit: May 16, 2020 23:20:30 GMT -5 by Bianca Sabbato
Post by Bianca Sabbato on Jun 27, 2020 16:32:27 GMT -5
Sorry for such a small upgrade. But I'll get it eventually so it doesn't hurt to have it now.
Posting to upgrade her strength from G --> F
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Administration (Strength)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] F
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Bianca never had a strong body on her own, and probably never will. But instead of accepting this as an insurmountable weakness she will never be able to surpass, she has focused her attention on finding a way to improve her physical potency even trough unorthodox methods. and has found the answer in aura studies and martial arts.
Overflowing her muscles with aura excess in short, calculated bursts; Bianca can improve her raw brute force to a point comparable with novice huntsman trainee, being able to lift around 100kg over her head.
As a downside. Her strength automatically falls to G rank if she ever runs out of aura.
Post by Bianca Sabbato on Aug 30, 2020 23:59:55 GMT -5
As I promised. Time for a nice upgrade to go try and take down the boat with more security ^^
Using 425 from my 430 xp to upgrade DURABILITY fomr E to D
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Stabilization (Durability)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] D
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Bianca has learned to strengthen her aura to a point it’s durability is comparable to that of thin metals. Even tough she was not blessed with a strong, resilient body or plentiful aura reserves like many of her peers, she has found a workaround in the form of disciplined training and constant control of the density of her aura all around her body to administrate and distribute her aura in an optimized manner to reduce as much damage intake as possible.
Post by Bianca Sabbato on Nov 5, 2020 0:32:30 GMT -5
Welp. Time for an overhaul. And sorry for putting all of this in a single post. But I feel it's better than to do things one at a time.
Feel completely free from calling me out and asking me to put it into separate posts if you feel it's necessary.
Bianca current XP = 609
With this XP I want to upgrade my STRENGTH from F-->E without flavor change. That would be 200 XP
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Administration (Strength)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] E
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Bianca never had a strong body on her own, and probably never will. But instead of accepting this as an insurmountable weakness she will never be able to surpass, she has focused her attention on finding a way to improve her physical potency even trough unorthodox methods. and has found the answer in aura studies and martial arts.
Overflowing her muscles with aura excess in short, calculated bursts; Bianca can improve her raw brute force to a point comparable with novice huntsman trainee, being able to lift around 150kg over her head.
As a downside. Her strength automatically falls to G rank if she ever runs out of aura.
Besides that. I want to buy a DUST ENHANCEMENT ability and upgrade it to E rank. That would be 275 XP
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] The lightning and the Sea (Dust Enhancement)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] E
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Bianca has finally decided to change Nereida’s original design to use the space reserved for the water explosion mechanisms as simple compartment from were a limited amount of small dust grenades can be kept hidden and ready for use.
This dust grenades are engraved in capsules of stone with the intent of letting Bianca telekinetically control them in order to attack her enemies. The grenades are a mixture of water and electricity dust that create a single target attack. The electricity brings the power while the water works as a workaround to not having you use as much raw dust as it would be usually necessary. Allowing the grenades to be compact and inconspicuous.
Although powerful, this attack requires for Bianca to have both enough aura left to use her semblance and have her weapon in hand to release the mechanism that frees the grenades from inside Nereida. If she were to be devoid of aura, the accuracy rank if this ability falls to G rank.
Since the area of effect is so small, Bianca can safely use this grenades even while locked in melee combat without any detriment to herself.
At its current rank. Bianca can only use this ability 2 times per thread. And it takes 2 post to do it's full damage.
609 XP - 475 XP from both upgrades = 134 XP left.
That would also get Bianca's TOTAL COMBAT XP to 2775. Putting her in SOPHOMORE tier.
Semblance: 275XP
Weapon: 275XP
Endurance: 700XP
Agility: 700XP
Martial arts: 275XP
Strength: 275XP
Dust: 275XP
TOTAL:2775 XP
And at last. Here you have my updated character sheet with all of the pertinent changes if the dust enhancement were to be approved:
Post by Bianca Sabbato on Nov 22, 2020 21:47:59 GMT -5
After closing Hi-Risk Hi-King. Bianca would gain 234 XP points
Bianca's xp would go from 308 > 542
From this. I wish to upgrade her MARTIAL ARTS from E-->D (425 xp cost) with small flavor change to make it more tidy.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Non-Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Combat eclectic. (Martial arts)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Non-Combat Ability:[/b][/font] D
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Non-Combat Ability:[/b][/font] On the streets of Mistral you have to hit fast and hard. No room for fancy stuff or dragging out fights unnecessarily least the cops come and arrest you both. Bianca has taken this lesson to heart, keeping what works and discarding what doesn’t of every martial art and combat style she ever comes across. Leaving her a step above most sophomore huntsman trainees.
First. I wanna exchange all of my RP for XP 140 RP = 70 XP 412 XP + 70 XP = 482 XP (0 RP left)
From this I wanna upgrade Bianca's Semblance from E --> D for 425 XP
482-425= 57XP left. / NO RP LEFT / Sem from E -- D THE CHANGE IS ALREADY CONTEMPLATED IN THE NEW FORMAT DOWN HERE. SMALL CHANGES ALREADY MADE TO ADJUST VALUES FROM UPGRADING SEMBLANCE.
[div align="center"][font face="Cinzel Decorative"][font size="6"] [font color="7bddd5"]Combat & Inventory[/font][/font][/font]
[font color="7bddd5"][b]One Sentence Summary of Semblance:[/b][/font] Bianca Sabbato has the manipulator semblance of State Change which allows the wielder to control and solidify the earth around her.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Semblance:[/b][/font] This semblance enables Bianca to telekinetically move anything comprised of earth, from particles of soil in the air to hardened boulders of this element within a reach of approximately the length of a semi-truck, or 15 to 18 meters. And harden her element up to the durability of thin metals like bronze.
Bianca makes extensive use of her semblance to alter the environment around her, creating both hazards and projectiles to assault the enemy from multiple sides. She also uses her semblance regularly for day to day task with ease.
Exerting herself, she can make substantial changes to her surroundings, like sinkholes, swamp-like areas and localized dust storms. Needless to be said, this feats of power greatly diminish her aura and leave her tired and aching all over.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Drawbacks of Semblance:[/b][/font] Every and all kind of earth being manipulated by her collapses and returns to it's original state immediately upon exiting Bianca's control range or if her aura is broken. No exceptions. Sizable changes on the terrain are expensive and hard to maintain. Every use of the semblance drains aura proportionately to the amount of earth manipulated
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Weapon:[/b][/font] E
[b]Category:[/b] Combatants. (+1)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Weapons:[/b][/font] Nereida is a combat spear that is as long as Bianca is tall, golden all along its body except for the robust spearhead of cyan coloration. Around the socket are multiple gnarled purple protrusions that coil and ensnare around the upper part of the shaft in resemblance with a coral reef.
The coils hide within them the mechanism that allow Bianca to transform her weapon. At the press of a button on the handle, the spearhead of the weapon falls of, revealing a long chain emerging from the interior of the shaft and connecting it to the spearhead, allowing Bianca to reach long distances with every swing of her weapon. Pressing the button again retracts the chain, returning the spear to its original form.
Nereida originally uses water dust charges that explode from the coral formation around the tip of the spear, and can be activated with a hidden button close to the handle of Nereida. This charges can be used on the extended form of the weapon with no problem whatsoever, allowing Bianca to do things like strike a far away enemy with the chained dart and immediately releasing a burst of water at point-blank.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Non-Combat Ability:[/b][/font] The golden years (Violin)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Non-Combat Ability:[/b][/font] F
[b]Category:[/b] Social. (+0)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Non-Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Before her life as a criminal in the streets of Mistral, Bianca’s parents where interested in their little girl learning a form of art, so she was encouraged to chose some kind of artistic pursue. The girl picked the Violin on a whim and with the passage of time has developed a decent skill in playing the stylish chordophone.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Non-Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Home Advantage (Streetwise).
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Non-Combat Ability:[/b][/font] F
[b]Category:[/b] Social. (+0)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Non-Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Bianca has an extent knowledge on the inner working of the Mistralian underworld, having valuable information not only on the layout of the streets, but also when and where to find useful and often hidden places (or persons) inside the city.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Tough Love (Agility)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] D
[b]Category:[/b] Hazard. (+2)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] The basis of Bianca’s martial training can be boiled down to getting pummeled by thugs and drunk teachers until she was able to dodge. This experience left more in the girl than mere childhood traumas, it also nurtured into her the ability to dodge, evade, roll and squirm out of the way of blows and projectiles on an almost instinctual level.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Stabilization (Durability)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] D
[b]Category:[/b] Hazard. (+2)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Bianca has learned to strengthen her aura to a point it’s durability is comparable to that of thin metals. Even tough she was not blessed with a strong, resilient body or plentiful aura reserves like many of her peers, she has found a workaround in the form of disciplined training and constant control of the density of her aura all around her body to administrate and distribute her aura in an optimized manner to reduce as much damage intake as possible.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Battle eclectic. (Martial arts)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] D
[b]Category:[/b] Combatants. (+2)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] On the streets you have to hit in a fast and decisive way. No room for fancy stuff or dragging out fights least the cops come and arrest you both. Bianca has taken this lesson to heart, taking what works and leaving behind what doesn’t of every martial art and combat style she ever comes across. Leaving her a step above most freshman huntsman trainees.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Administration (Strength)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] E
[b]Category:[/b] Combatants. (+1)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Bianca never had a strong body on her own, and probably never will. But instead of accepting this as an insurmountable weakness she will never be able to surpass, she has focused her attention on finding a way to improve her physical potency even trough unorthodox methods. and has found the answer in aura studies and martial arts.
Overflowing her muscles with aura excess in short, calculated bursts; Bianca can improve her raw brute force to a point comparable with novice huntsman trainee, being able to lift around 150kg over her head.
As a downside. Her strength automatically falls to G rank if she ever runs out of aura.
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] The lightning and the Sea (Dust Enhancement)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] E
[b]Category:[/b] Combatants. (+1)
[font color="7bddd5"][b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b][/font] Bianca has finally decided to change Nereida’s original design to use the space reserved for the water explosion mechanisms as simple compartment from were a limited amount of small dust grenades can be kept hidden and ready for use.
This dust grenades are engraved in capsules of stone with the intent of letting Bianca telekinetically control them in order to attack her enemies. The grenades are a mixture of water and electricity dust that create a single target attack. The electricity brings the power while the water works as a workaround to not having you use as much raw dust as it would be usually necessary. Allowing the grenades to be compact and inconspicuous.
Although powerful, this attack requires for Bianca to have both enough aura left to use her semblance and have her weapon in hand to release the mechanism that frees the grenades from inside Nereida. If she were to be devoid of aura, the accuracy rank if this ability falls to G rank.
Since the area of effect is so small, Bianca can safely use this grenades even while locked in melee combat without any detriment to herself.
Post by Bianca Sabbato on Dec 30, 2020 5:33:52 GMT -5
Hello o/
Detailing all of the changes I did, minus the format change (Vitals, Category)
For starters, I changed her Quote:
From: " What comes, goes." To: "The difference between the motion and the act... Is the intent"
I changed her Face Claim. This is a change we actually did in the face listing, but never got to edit on the sheet.
From: Cassim. Magi: The Labyrinth of Magic. To: Zainab -Magi.
Changed the OOC name to fit with the one I really use. Since the first one I put in there before I even made the discord account and never got to change it.
From: Enkei To: Moonheim
Changed her Romantic Orientation, to basically the same but with a different word. Because I liked the word more.
From: Homosexual. To: Lesbian.
Now, onto the important stuff.
Semblance
Went from this:
Semblance Name: State Change
Rank of Semblance: E
Semblance Type: Manipulator. Solidification.
One Sentence Summary of Semblance: State Change is a manipulator type semblance that allows the user to solidify and control the the earth around them
Description of Semblance: This semblance enables Bianca to telekinetically move anything comprised of earth, from particles of soil in the air to hardened boulders of this element within a reach of approximately the length of a telephone pole, or 10 to 12 meters . Bianca makes extensive use of her semblance to alter the environment around her, which mixed whit her martial arts skills make for a formidable combination.
Exerting herself, she can make substantial changes to her surroundings like sinkholes, swamp-like areas and localized dust storms. Needless to be said, this feats greatly diminish her aura and leave her tired and aching all over.
Drawbacks of Semblance: . Manipulated earth collapses immediately upon exiting Bianca's control range. Sizable changes on the terrain are costly and hard to maintain. Every use of the semblance drains aura dependent on the amount of earth manipulated
To this: Rank updated (and change in range), Categories added, one sentence summary updated to fit with the new format, added small mention to her ability to harden the element and up to what range.
I also edited the final sentence of the second to last paragraph purely for flavor. I changed "this feats" to "this feats of power" in the last paragraph for flavor.
Drawback was edited to make wording more clear imo.
Semblance Name: State Change
Rank of Semblance: D
Semblance Type: Manipulator.
Primary Category: Combatants. (+2)
Secondary Category: Obstacle. (+1)
One Sentence Summary of Semblance: Bianca Sabbato has the manipulator semblance of State Change which allows the wielder to control and solidify the earth around her.
Description of Semblance: This semblance enables Bianca to telekinetically move anything comprised of earth, from particles of soil in the air to hardened boulders of this element within a reach of approximately the length of a semi-truck, or 15 to 18meters. And harden her element up to the durability of thin metals like bronze.
Bianca makes extensive use of her semblance to alter the environment around her, creating both hazards and projectiles to assault the enemy from multiple sides. She also uses her semblance regularly for day to day task with ease.
Exerting herself, she can make substantial changes to her surroundings, like sinkholes, swamp-like areas and localized dust storms. Needless to be said, this feats of power greatly diminish her aura and leave her tired and aching all over.
Drawbacks of Semblance: Every and all kind of earth being manipulated by her collapses and returns to it's original state immediately upon exiting Bianca's control range or if her aura is broken. No exceptions. Sizable changes on the terrain are expensive and hard to maintain. Every use of the semblance drains aura proportionately to the amount of earth manipulated
I also just noticed that I forgot to add what kind of manipulation was (Manipulation / Solidification) in the new version, so if you give me the go, I would like to do just that.
Weapon, went from this:
Weapon Name: Nereida.
Rank of Weapon(s): E
Description of Weapons(s): Nereida is a combat spear as long as Bianca is tall, golden all along its body except for the robust spearhead of cyan coloration. Around the socket are multiple gnarled purple protrusions that coil and ensnare around the upper part of the shaft in resemblance with a coral reef.
The coils hide within them the mechanism that allow Bianca to transform her weapon. At the press of a button on the handle, the spearhead of the weapon falls of, revealing a long chain emerging from the interior of the shaft and connecting it to the spearhead, allowing Bianca to reach long distances with every swing of her weapon. Pressing the button again retracts the chain, returning the spear to its original form.
Nereida uses water dust charges that explode from the coral formation around the tip of the spear, and can be activated with a hidden button close to the handle of Nereida. This charges can be used on the extended form of the weapon with no problem whatsoever, allowing Bianca to do things like strike a far away enemy with the chained dart and immediately releasing a burst of water at point-blank.
to this, just 2 minor changes (Besides changing Category):
Changed the words "combat spear long as" to "combat spear that is as long as" for clarity.
Added the word "Originally" at the beginning of the last paragraph.
Weapon Name: Nereida.
Rank of Weapon: E
Category: Combatants. (+1)
Description of Weapons: Nereida is a combat spear that is as long as Bianca is tall, golden all along its body except for the robust spearhead of cyan coloration. Around the socket are multiple gnarled purple protrusions that coil and ensnare around the upper part of the shaft in resemblance with a coral reef.
The coils hide within them the mechanism that allow Bianca to transform her weapon. At the press of a button on the handle, the spearhead of the weapon falls of, revealing a long chain emerging from the interior of the shaft and connecting it to the spearhead, allowing Bianca to reach long distances with every swing of her weapon. Pressing the button again retracts the chain, returning the spear to its original form.
Nereida originally uses water dust charges that explode from the coral formation around the tip of the spear, and can be activated with a hidden button close to the handle of Nereida. This charges can be used on the extended form of the weapon with no problem whatsoever, allowing Bianca to do things like strike a far away enemy with the chained dart and immediately releasing a burst of water at point-blank.
Non combats: Violin:
Original:
Name of Non-Combat Ability: The golden years (Violin).
Rank of Non-Combat Ability: F
Description of Non-Combat Ability: Before her life as a thug in the streets of Mistral, Bianca’s family where interested in their little child learning a form of art. The girl picked the Violin just because and with the passage of time has developed a decent skill in playing the stylish chordophone.
New, I changed an assortment of words purely for cosmetic reasons (thug, family, child / criminal, parents, girl) Added segment "so she was encouraged to chose some kind of artistic pursue" ; and changed expression "just because" to "in a whim". Added Category.
Name of Non-Combat Ability: The golden years (Violin).
Rank of Non-Combat Ability: F
Category: Social (+0).
Description of Non-Combat Ability: Before her life as a criminal in the streets of Mistral, Bianca’s parents where interested in their little girl learning a form of art, so she was encouraged to chose some kind of artistic pursue. The girl picked the Violin on a whim and with the passage of time has developed a decent skill in playing the stylish chordophone.
Non-Combats: Streetwise
Original:
Name of Non-Combat Ability: Home Advantage (Streetwise).
Rank of Non-Combat Ability: F
Description of Non-Combat Ability: Bianca has an extent knowledge on the inner working of the Mistralian underworld, having valuable information not only on the layout of the streets, but also when and where to find useful and often occult places (or persons) within the city.
New version, added Category and changed 2 words (Occult , Within / Hidden, Inside)
Name of Non-Combat Ability: Home Advantage (Streetwise).
Rank of Non-Combat Ability: F
Category: Social. (+0)
Description of Non-Combat Ability: Bianca has an extent knowledge on the inner working of the Mistralian underworld, having valuable information not only on the layout of the streets, but also when and where to find useful and often [u]hidden [/u]places (or persons) [u]inside [/u]the city.
I actually forgot to pass something from the original Dust Enhancement to the new one. In which I forgot to put the 2 uses limitation.
In case this might be suspected of cheating, I'd like to point out it would be the most stupid way of cheating, trying to bypass a limitation everyone knows exists in dust enhancement abilities, and that I have IC mentioned in more than one thread.
Tbh, I most likely just missed it when copy-pasting since it's at the bottom.
Original:
Name of Combat Ability: The lightning and the Sea (Dust Enhancement)
Rank of Combat Ability:[/font] E
Description of Combat Ability:
Bianca has finally decided to change Nereida’s original design to use the space reserved for the water explosion mechanisms as simple compartment from were a limited amount of small dust grenades can be kept hidden and ready for use.
This dust grenades are engraved in capsules of stone with the intent of letting Bianca telekinetically control them in order to attack her enemies. The grenades are a mixture of water and electricity dust that create a single target attack. The electricity brings the power while the water works as a workaround to not having you use as much raw dust as it would be usually necessary. Allowing the grenades to be compact and inconspicuous.
Although powerful, this attack requires for Bianca to have both enough aura left to use her semblance and have her weapon in hand to release the mechanism that frees the grenades from inside Nereida. If she were to be devoid of aura, the accuracy rank if this ability falls to G rank.
Since the area of effect is so small, Bianca can safely use this grenades even while locked in melee combat without any detriment to herself.
At its current rank. Bianca can only use this ability 2 times per thread. And it takes 2 post to do it's full damage. Newer One (As you can see, I added Category, but forgot to pass the last sentence that indicates number of uses and posts for total damage):
Name of Combat Ability: The lightning and the Sea (Dust Enhancement)
Rank of Combat Ability:[/font] E
Category: Combatants. (+1)
Description of Combat Ability: Bianca has finally decided to change Nereida’s original design to use the space reserved for the water explosion mechanisms as simple compartment from were a limited amount of small dust grenades can be kept hidden and ready for use.
This dust grenades are engraved in capsules of stone with the intent of letting Bianca telekinetically control them in order to attack her enemies. The grenades are a mixture of water and electricity dust that create a single target attack. The electricity brings the power while the water works as a workaround to not having you use as much raw dust as it would be usually necessary. Allowing the grenades to be compact and inconspicuous.
Although powerful, this attack requires for Bianca to have both enough aura left to use her semblance and have her weapon in hand to release the mechanism that frees the grenades from inside Nereida. If she were to be devoid of aura, the accuracy rank if this ability falls to G rank.
Since the area of effect is so small, Bianca can safely use this grenades even while locked in melee combat without any detriment to herself.
So, I would like to add that thing, if that's possible.
It would stay like this, with bot Categories and the last sentence.
Name of Combat Ability: The lightning and the Sea (Dust Enhancement)
Rank of Combat Ability:[/font] E
Category: Combatants. (+1)
Description of Combat Ability:
Bianca has finally decided to change Nereida’s original design to use the space reserved for the water explosion mechanisms as simple compartment from were a limited amount of small dust grenades can be kept hidden and ready for use.
This dust grenades are engraved in capsules of stone with the intent of letting Bianca telekinetically control them in order to attack her enemies. The grenades are a mixture of water and electricity dust that create a single target attack. The electricity brings the power while the water works as a workaround to not having you use as much raw dust as it would be usually necessary. Allowing the grenades to be compact and inconspicuous.
Although powerful, this attack requires for Bianca to have both enough aura left to use her semblance and have her weapon in hand to release the mechanism that frees the grenades from inside Nereida. If she were to be devoid of aura, the accuracy rank if this ability falls to G rank.
Since the area of effect is so small, Bianca can safely use this grenades even while locked in melee combat without any detriment to herself.
At its current rank. Bianca can only use this ability 2 times per thread. And it takes 2 post to do it's full damage.
That would be all for the parts I changed when originally submitting the whole thing (Minus the changes for the new format, like adding a category for every ability. And upgrading Martial Arts from E to D without flavor change).
If you give me your approval for things to stay like this (or after we change / turn back things that you don't approve) I will prepare the full code for all the sheet so you can either make a clean sweep with the old one (since I cannot edit nor erase it) or for you to tell me to create a new thread for it in the accepted students section. ^^
Last Edit: Dec 30, 2020 6:01:23 GMT -5 by Bianca Sabbato
The difference between the motion and the act... Is the intent[div][attr=class,cs-main][table][tr][td][img]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/35/02/ce/3502cefff43e63b5db6485d04f38cf56.jpg[/img][/td][td][div][attr=class,title nomargin]Age[/div]
[b]One Sentence Summary of Semblance:[/b] Bianca Sabbato has the manipulator semblance of State Change which allows the wielder to control and solidify the earth around her.
[b]Description of Semblance:[/b] This semblance enables Bianca to telekinetically move anything comprised of earth, from particles of soil in the air to hardened boulders of this element within a reach of approximately the length of a semi-truck, or 15 to 18 meters. And harden her element up to the durability of thin metals like bronze.
Bianca makes extensive use of her semblance to alter the environment around her, creating both hazards and projectiles to assault the enemy from multiple sides. She also uses her semblance regularly for day to day task with ease.
Exerting herself, she can make substantial changes to her surroundings, like sinkholes, swamp-like areas and localized dust storms. Needless to be said, this feats of power greatly diminish her aura and leave her tired and aching all over.
[b]Drawbacks of Semblance:[/b] Every and all kind of earth being manipulated by her collapses and returns to it's original state immediately upon exiting Bianca's control range or if her aura is broken. No exceptions. Sizable changes on the terrain are expensive and hard to maintain. Every use of the semblance drains aura proportionately to the amount of earth manipulated
[div][attr=class,title]Weapon(s)[/div]
[b]Weapon Name:[/b] Nereida.
[b]Rank of Weapon(s):[/b] E
[b]Category:[/b] Combatants. (+1)
[b]Description of Weapons(s):[/b] Nereida is a combat spear that is as long as Bianca is tall, golden all along its body except for the robust spearhead of cyan coloration. Around the socket are multiple gnarled purple protrusions that coil and ensnare around the upper part of the shaft in resemblance with a coral reef.
The coils hide within them the mechanism that allow Bianca to transform her weapon. At the press of a button on the handle, the spearhead of the weapon falls of, revealing a long chain emerging from the interior of the shaft and connecting it to the spearhead, allowing Bianca to reach long distances with every swing of her weapon. Pressing the button again retracts the chain, returning the spear to its original form.
Nereida originally uses water dust charges that explode from the coral formation around the tip of the spear, and can be activated with a hidden button close to the handle of Nereida. This charges can be used on the extended form of the weapon with no problem whatsoever, allowing Bianca to do things like strike a far away enemy with the chained dart and immediately releasing a burst of water at point-blank.
[div][attr=class,title]Non-Combat Abilities[/div]
[b]Name of Non-Combat Ability:[/b] The golden years (Violin)
[b]Rank of Non-Combat Ability:[/b] F
[b]Category:[/b] Social. (+0)
[b]Description of Non-Combat Ability:[/b] Before her life as a criminal in the streets of Mistral, Bianca’s parents where interested in their little girl learning a form of art, so she was encouraged to chose some kind of artistic pursue. The girl picked the Violin on a whim and with the passage of time has developed a decent skill in playing the stylish chordophone.
[b]Name of Non-Combat Ability:[/b] Home Advantage (Streetwise).
[b]Rank of Non-Combat Ability:[/b] F
[b]Category:[/b] Social. (+0)
[b]Description of Non-Combat Ability:[/b] Bianca has an extent knowledge on the inner working of the Mistralian underworld, having valuable information not only on the layout of the streets, but also when and where to find useful and often hidden places (or persons) inside the city.
[div][attr=class,title]Combat Abilities[/div]
[b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b] Tough Love (Agility)
[b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b] D
[b]Category:[/b] Hazard. (+2)
[b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b] The basis of Bianca’s martial training can be boiled down to getting pummeled by thugs and drunk teachers until she was able to dodge. This experience left more in the girl than mere childhood traumas, it also nurtured into her the ability to dodge, evade, roll and squirm out of the way of blows and projectiles on an almost instinctual level.
[b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b] Stabilization (Durability)
[b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b] D
[b]Category:[/b] Hazard. (+2)
[b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b] Bianca has learned to strengthen her aura to a point it’s durability is comparable to that of thin metals. Even tough she was not blessed with a strong, resilient body or plentiful aura reserves like many of her peers, she has found a workaround in the form of disciplined training and constant control of the density of her aura all around her body to administrate and distribute her aura in an optimized manner to reduce as much damage intake as possible.
[b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b] Battle eclectic. (Martial arts)
[b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b] D
[b]Category:[/b] Combatants. (+2)
[b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b] On the streets you have to hit in a fast and decisive way. No room for fancy stuff or dragging out fights least the cops come and arrest you both. Bianca has taken this lesson to heart, taking what works and leaving behind what doesn’t of every martial art and combat style she ever comes across. Leaving her a step above most freshman huntsman trainees.
[b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b] Administration (Strength)
[b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b] E
[b]Category:[/b] Combatants. (+1)
[b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b] Bianca never had a strong body on her own, and probably never will. But instead of accepting this as an insurmountable weakness she will never be able to surpass, she has focused her attention on finding a way to improve her physical potency even trough unorthodox methods. and has found the answer in aura studies and martial arts.
Overflowing her muscles with aura excess in short, calculated bursts; Bianca can improve her raw brute force to a point comparable with novice huntsman trainee, being able to lift around 150kg over her head.
As a downside. Her strength automatically falls to G rank if she ever runs out of aura.
[b]Name of Combat Ability:[/b] The lightning and the Sea (Dust Enhancement)
[b]Rank of Combat Ability:[/b] E
[b]Category:[/b] Combatants. (+1)
[b]Description of Combat Ability:[/b] Bianca has finally decided to change Nereida’s original design to use the space reserved for the water explosion mechanisms as simple compartment from were a limited amount of small dust grenades can be kept hidden and ready for use.
This dust grenades are engraved in capsules of stone with the intent of letting Bianca telekinetically control them in order to attack her enemies. The grenades are a mixture of water and electricity dust that create a single target attack. The electricity brings the power while the water works as a workaround to not having you use as much raw dust as it would be usually necessary. Allowing the grenades to be compact and inconspicuous.
Although powerful, this attack requires for Bianca to have both enough aura left to use her semblance and have her weapon in hand to release the mechanism that frees the grenades from inside Nereida. If she were to be devoid of aura, the accuracy rank if this ability falls to G rank.
Since the area of effect is so small, Bianca can safely use this grenades even while locked in melee combat without any detriment to herself.
At its current rank. Bianca can only use this ability 2 times per thread. And it takes 2 post to do it's full damage.
*External drive: To do as much good as possible to make amends for her past. Even if it means sacrificing her own life to achieve it.
She joined Haven both in an effort to earn her freedom and an attempt to atone for her sins. For this reason, she is also known for spending her free time on the outskirts of ground district hunting down grimm or similar things. On Haven itself she takes her training and studies seriously and is always on the look for new learning opportunities. Putting more value on personal growth than quantifiable achievements.
Furthermore, she is almost completely obedient of whatever order the council or Haven could edict. She may don’t like them or their way of doing things, she may even question them openly, but she will obey nevertheless.
*Internal drive: Learning to forgive herself, love herself, take care of herself and carry on with her life.
She’s stressed and overworked. And would like nothing more than to just disconnect herself from everything for a while and simply enjoy the small mercies of life. But the guilt and need to set things straight even beyond what’s logically possible force her to put basically everything and everyone else beyond her own wellbeing.
She will happily jump onto the opportunity of experiencing new things and meeting new people, even if rationalizing it as “necessary resting time and making useful connections” just to have an excuse to relax for a while.
[b]Fears:[/b]
Main fear: Being left alone: She’s terrified of the thought of people close to her simply abandoning her. Be it on a spiritual level, a physic level or plainly dying on her.
Secondary fears:
-Failure. She’s afraid of failing the people who put their expectations on her, whether these people exist or not is up to debate.
-Eating avocados, because she legitimately cannot tell if they are rotten or not.
-Smoke dense enough to obscure her faunus vision. Although this is more of an internal freak-out than an externally expressed one, since this will put Bianca into “Fight or Flight” mode almost immediately.
[b]Style of Self-Expression:[/b] Bianca Is outgoing and extroverted, but internally sometimes she chastises herself for her behavior. If she fucks up in a social situation, she will try to pretend it didn't happen to see if people didn’t notice or decide to ignore it as well. She’s secretive about her past but really open about pretty much everything else.
More often than not she will try to appear cool and collected, and happy, even if she’s feeling down. This can, and will result in incidents where she just cannot hold it inside any longer and lets it all out at once.
Besides this, Bianca Is very opinionated and not afraid of expressing her ideas, no matter how badly those could make her look, but she doesn’t mind other people having different opinions than here (she kinda likes it)
She is also known to keep going, and going with her tirades. Talking as if her life depended on it. And is a known quality that she doesn’t know when to shut the hell up, and is likely to say things that could put her in a rough spot.
[b]Most Important Thing:[/b] The idea of change. Bianca firmly believes in the power of change. That every person, no matter how horrid they have been, can redeem themselves if they really want it. And that even if some crimes cannot be forgiven nor forgotten, everyone deserves, and should be guaranteed a fair opportunity to do as much good as they can to give something back to the world at large. If not for the people hurt by them, at least for themselves.
Bianca doesn’t care for who you were before, but for who you currently are. If you’re still acting like an asshole she will call you out for it, but if you are genuinely trying to change, then no matter who you were before, she will give you a chance, and perhaps even more leeway than what your truly deserve, and forgive much than what she really should.
You made the world a shittier place, you don’t get to run scot free with it. You are gonna bust your ass trying to fix things. And she’ll help you along the way to making things at least a little better
[div][attr=class,title]History Freeform[/div]
Born to a middle class working family in the Mistralian wind district, the life of Bianca seemed to be destined for a tranquil, peaceful existence in which people getting in her hair about her reptilian tail was supposed to be the worst thing the girl would have to face.
Daughter of a human man and a lizard faunus, Bianca's childhood was one full of love, care and protection from her hard-working parents who instilled in the girl a love for the arts and a strong work ethic and moral compass... Of course, everything changed when the faunus war hit them.
Bianca only had 9 years at the time, but she vividly remembers it as if it had happened yesterday. One day mama and papa where reading her bedtime stories and the other both of them where detained or enlisted themselves to go fight in a strange war against people they didn’t know to achieve some vague victory that never actually felt like one.
The girl was left only with her grandma to wait for a father and a mother that would never come back home. The old crocodile faunus that was her granny took care of her to the best of her capabilities, but sooner rather than later she too succumbed, this time to grief for a daughter that she knew would never see again.
Now utterly alone in the world. The young faunus didn’t last long before falling in the wrong hands. More specifically, on the hands of one of the criminal houses of Mistral.
There she learned the hard way how to be useful, starting with smuggling and courier jobs and finalizing as a full fledged soldier once her talents for battle manifested. There the mobster equipped her with the trusty spear she uses to this day and expected for her to pay every single lien that thing had costed them.
The girl, seeing herself indebted to them even if they were criminals, complied.
Long story short, the band collapsed a certain time later because of conflicts of interest among the members. And now the girl was alone once again.
Hungry and unable to get a job in anything that didn’t involve breaking peoples legs, the now 16 years old took a decision that would change her life forever.
“... Screw it, just screw it all to dust... Hey! Officer!. I want to handle myself in!”
Unbeknownst to her, the act of turning herself in to the police gave her a fair degree of leeway on the court, which after contemplating the facts and crimes committed by the faunus, decided to give her a test period on a juvenile detention center with a possibility of transference to an adult prison if she showed any sign of misconduct during her stay in the institution.
Needless to say, Bianca’s attitude was stellar. To the point that in her 17 birthday she was allowed to resume her training on the premises that she was to apply to the huntsman tests on Haven when she were 18. And a promise of official pardon for her crimes if she managed to become a huntress.
Confronted with the opportunity to be someone for the first time in her life, Bianca resumed her training with renewed strength. And as promised, on her 18 birthday she applied for the test that would change her life.
The combat test was not easy. There were some strong candidates in her group, but in the end Bianca managed to surface victorious in great part for her profound need, for her desperation of getting in into Haven that led her to push herself past beyond her limits.
The psychological test was even harder, but in the end her palpable nervousness and the way she stuttered her words led the selectors to believe that no hidden intentions where instrumental in the young faunus desire to join the institution. More than that, they actually judged that contact with more people her age would likely be just what she needed.
Now a freshman in one of the most prestigious academies in the world, Bianca is ready for the challenge of, for the first time in her life, become a hero.
... And she has absolutely no idea of how to do that...